Instead of writing her report, Annie made a short documentary. She pushed 'save' on this fantastic Showme by mistake, before she edited. Can you find the three things we decided needed to be changed during our edit? Can you write 2 stars and a wish for Annie?
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Year 5
4/11/2013 10:41:17 am
Stars: Good pictures describe the information- David
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albane
26/11/2013 02:25:52 pm
stars:good pictures !
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Micaela Broadmeadow Junior School
4/12/2013 09:28:43 pm
Very good at listing Unhealthy thing
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Whitley,Broadmedow,England
4/12/2013 09:28:49 pm
That is very interesting I think I learned something newfrom that.
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Anna Y5
7/1/2014 06:51:48 pm
STAR:You has a very good explations.
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AuthorWe are a Year 5 (Grade 4) class in an international school in China. We all have English as an additional language. Our home countries are: Korea, Belgium, Denmark, China,England and our teacher is from New Zealand Archives
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