We have been learning how to read for information, to take notes, and to write a report in organised paragraphs. We have been trying to write topic sentences, open with a hook, write complex and compound sentences, write about feelings and opinions and use effective verbs. Can you find any of these targets in our writing?
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Amber Y5 YCIS Qingdao
10/11/2015 09:04:39 pm
Neil Armstrong
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Julia Y5 YCIS Qingdao
10/11/2015 09:26:25 pm
Neil Armstrong
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Magnus Y5 YCIS Qingdao
10/11/2015 09:34:49 pm
Neil Alden Armstrong
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Elin
11/11/2015 09:07:47 pm
About Neil Armstrong
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Jamie Y5 Qingdao
11/11/2015 09:14:52 pm
Introduction
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Gabriela
11/11/2015 10:59:07 pm
Neil Armstrong
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Ben
12/11/2015 01:46:12 am
Hi, I'm Ben from Lostock primary school
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Sally
11/11/2015 11:07:02 pm
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Jerry
12/11/2015 09:44:31 pm
Neil Alden Armstrong
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Amy
12/11/2015 10:39:08 pm
Neil Armstrong-Amy
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ivan
27/11/2015 01:26:34 am
Thank you for telling me that you are going to write about Roald Dahl
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AuthorWe are a Year 5 (Grade 4) class in an international school in China. We all have English as an additional language. Our home countries are: Korea, Belgium, Denmark, China,England and our teacher is from New Zealand Archives
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