Can you give her two stars and a wish? She is writing about Pompeii and the volcanic eruption Write 3 stars and a wish for Christoffer Can you give him 3 starts and a wish? Can you give two stars and a wish to Albane? Do you know what makes you unhealthy?
There are many things that can harm your body. Unhealthy things can harm you when you eat, when you breathe or through your skin. You can also get unhealthy while you breathe too much pollution. Some diseases can harm your body as well. Smoking Smocking makes you unhealthy, or even kills you. There are many harmful things in tobacco smoke. Carbon monoxide is one of the ingredients in it. It is poisonous. It takes the place of your oxygen and it also makes your heart and lungs work harder. There are 3 types of smoke: cigarettes, cigars and tobacco. Nicotine is addictive and wants to smoke more and more. It makes your teeth yellow. It can also harm your heart and your blood vessels. Tar is very sticky and makes you cough. It can also make your lungs work harder to get the oxygen in your blood. Drugs and medicines Drugs can change how your body works. Drugs and medicines can help you if you are ill but some drugs such as tea coffee and coal are not against the law. To get some medicines you need to go to the doctor and some can be bought from a pharmacy or a shop. Some people use bad drugs and cannot stop taking them. Sunbathing Sunbathing is good for you for a few minutes every day but not too much. It gives you vitamin D that makes yopur teeth and bones healthy. But sun bathing can also harm your body causing skin cancer from UV rays. Now you know which things are good for you and which things are bad for you. So remember smoking, drugs and sun bathing can kill you or make you ill. Watch out! Instead of writing her report, Annie made a short documentary. She pushed 'save' on this fantastic Showme by mistake, before she edited. Can you find the three things we decided needed to be changed during our edit? Can you write 2 stars and a wish for Annie? The Waterpark - a non fiction recount by Kevin who is just a beginner at writing in English.30/10/2013 Water park On Wednesday my family and I went to the water park, because Wednesday was a holiday. I was very happy. I swam in the swimming pool and spa. My father and I swam together, but my mother didn’t swim. We ate lunch in the restaurant, but lunch was not delicious. Can you write Kevin 2 stars and 1 wish?
Fantastic Lambs by Annie Y5 “I am so cold!” I moaned as I sat annoyed in the car. I was going up a high mountain, so high that it reached the big white clouds. “The higher you go, the more arctic you are!” explained my mum, shivering as well. We had driven to a height of one thousand kilometers! Five minutes minute later, we arrived at a farm. I gazed at a big plateau, and saw some white figures. Its lambs! I was so excited that I jumped out of the car and happily skipped to the lambs. ‘Where is Dad?” I wondered. Oh here he is, holding a box.” “What is it?” I asked. “This is food for lambs. Feed them,” explained my dad. I showed the food to the wooly lambs. Oh no, the lambs are chasing me to get food! Some of them licked my hands. It felt lovely. I touched the lamb’s fluffy body and thought the wool would be a great place to have a comfortable sleep! At last, the cute lambs needed to go home so I sadly said good bye. However, all my lamb friends were too sad to leave me and they all snuggled up to me. Finally, the owner came and took them home. What a fun day with lambs! I wish I could have some wool for me to keep out the cold wind. |
AuthorWe are a Year 5 (Grade 4) class in an international school in China. We all have English as an additional language. Our home countries are: Korea, Belgium, Denmark, China,England and our teacher is from New Zealand Archives
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